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Another World
Contributed by
renstar
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:12:17 PM in AEST
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Yesterday was just another day
i think i'll fly away
into another world
memories we had and
memories i loved
memories they seem so far away
so i'll say goodbye today
and i'll be on my way
cos today i have found another way
far from this world of mine i will survive
yesterday was just another day
i think i'll fly away into another world
Copyright ©
renstar
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2004-12-05 16:12:17]
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Re: Another World
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:26:44 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem felt like i could really relate to it! - the feeling on finding something new and getting away from something that was love- nicely worded piece of work.
feel free to comment on my poems also :) |
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Re: Another World
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 05:43:04 PM AEST
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I wish i could fly and touch the sky if it wasn't so black. And this hell of life would subside. Nicely written.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Another World
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by punkprincess6689 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:50:43 PM AEST
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| i really like ur poem and i feel that way rite now i wish i could just go somewhere and leave this life behind |
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