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Baby, Give Me A Chance

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Baby, give me a chance
So we can have a great romance
To you I will give lots of
The feelings in my heart; feelings of love

Baby, just one chance is all I ask
Proving to you that it can work is my task
So very deep is my love for you
I've got a feeling, you feel love for me too

Baby, is asking you for a chance too much
If it is, perhaps I'll change your mind with a touch
All day a kiss from your lips is what I seek
Please tell me my chance with you isn't bleak

Baby, all I need from you is a chance
To prove our friendship can advance
This friendship we have is simply the best
But a romance for us we simply must put to the test

Baby, give me a chance
So we can have a great romance
Baby, thoughts of you make me sing and dance
Please, give me a chance




Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-25 15:30:00]
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Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 04:06:09 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written
i really enjoyed reading this one
Thanks for sharing it,
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST
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This is a great write Candice,
What a lovely heartfelt plea to someone you quite obviously feel you love very much indeed.
I hope for you that your questions are answered fully and satisfactorily!

I loved it again great write!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 12:27:22 AM AEST
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Dean, I hope so too. And I do love him very much. But right now all I really need are answers, good or bad. I just need to know. But I can't help but hope his answers are what I want to hear. I wrote this one at 6 o'clock this morning. Because I couldn't sleep and I was thinking about him.
ShadowsCloud


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:38:11 PM AEST
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You'll send yourself insane Candice,
Sleep's important so that you are able to be clear of mind and say exactly what it is you feel when the opportunity arises!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:47:54 PM AEST
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Dean, I think I might have already made my self insane. Ever since I realized that I was in love with Shadow (about a year and a half ago. It's take me a while to work up my courage) my mind has been going in so many circles that I can hardly make sence of it.
ShadowsCloud


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:58:18 PM AEST
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A YEAR AND A HALF!! Candice,
and you still haven't done anything about it!!

You realise this makes you as bad as me!Hehehe

Try wearing the glasses when you know you'll see him, you never know he may think like me!!

With love
Dean;-)


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:14:19 PM AEST
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Dean, I know, but I have TRIED to tell him countless times but i always chicken out of it. And so what if that makes me like you! I never say that I was perfect. In matters of love I am far from perfect, I can never seem to get it right. Hopefully this time I will. He has seen me both with and with out my glasses, he has told me that he likes me better with them. He said that it seems more like the real me. What ever that is.
ShadowsCloud


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:39:24 PM AEST
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Gasp!!! How dare you imply that I'm not perfect Candice!!:-0
Only kidding!Hehe

I can't help with what's the real you, as you all the time is the real you surely? I'll have to think about this one!

One day you won't 'chicken out' and you'll be very surprised with yourself! I have been on the odd occasion I've been brave with showing my feelings for someone!

With love
Dean:-)


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 09:56:05 PM AEST
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Dean, I did not mean to imply that you waren't perfect. But if you think about it NO BODY is perfect.

I think what he meant about the real me is that my glasses show my intelligent side which it closer to who I am than anything else. Although once or twice he has seen my wild side and he likes that as well.

I hope you are right about me not chickening out one day. It is rather annoying.

ShadowsCloud


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Mya on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 04:35:15 PM AEST
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Nice poem


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Mya on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 04:35:20 PM AEST
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Nice poem


Re: Baby, Give Me A Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:06:57 PM AEST
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This Is Cute He's Missing Out




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