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i want your bodys closeness
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:33:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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i want your body next to mine,
hold me close,
let our auras incline,
an estaticbond of a bodily pair,
two souls together,
fullfilled with passionate care,
tender kisses,
arms embrasing my chest,
words of romance,
eyes locked,
you give it your best,
its our first time,
never been close to anyone like this before,
pertaining the pleasure,
ever so closer, holding tighter for more,
just you and me,
in a warp of our own,
in our rightfull place,
then a look of true love surrounds me,
when i look into your beautiful face
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2004-12-05 14:33:59]
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Re: i want your bodys closeness
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:46:07 PM AEST
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| It's a nice write and a pleasure to meet a virgin.. |
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Re: i want your bodys closeness
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by Flicker on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:17:44 PM AEST
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| oh wow thats a great poem.i wish i could write a poem like that.that poem is so passionate.it was amazing to read.keep writing poems,your really good at it |
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