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Harsh Truth

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:34:06 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

beautiful stranger,
you shook your tail at me,
you stepped inside the box,
and gave me the key,

you turned around,
showed me the burning feeling is good,
you flashed your heart's lights,
you gave it all you could,

you cut the ribbon,
then tried to walk right in,
strutted into my heart like a devil,
eager to commit sin,

you wanted love in return,
for the pain you felt,
inside you burn,
under this lust you are helpless,
but you'll quickly learn,
you'll have to suffer,
if your gonna' yearn,
you'll live ok on your own,
as this boy is taken,
so you'll have to walk alone,

theres a jam inside my soul,
theres is a void,
left with a gaping hole,
but you cant fill it,
you havnt paid your toll,
your cars in the car park,
under the waiting roll,
you'll have to see,
when i am next free,
maybe then you'll have a shot,
but now i cant let you in,
im sorry baby,
its reality, believe it or not,

i see your'e trying,
to be someone better for show,
but dont kid yourself lady,
your hurtin inside too much to just let it go,
your on bail,
your own speed's high,
your just gonna' fail,
so il say goodbye,

before the truth hurts you,
let me hand you your pride,
you played a good game,
even though you just watched on the side,
i need to go now,
im in the middle of a lovers crime,
so darlin' please keep on dreaming,
maybe next time...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone ... [ 2004-12-05 13:34:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Harsh Truth (User Rating: 1 )
by Flicker on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:29:48 PM AEST
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that was a really good poem too.I see that you like to write poems about love.do you write any more poems?

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