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Pain
Contributed by
Jakenstein
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:14:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I
Am dieing inside
I just can't hide
The pain
Goin through life
And livin it all in vain
Lookin for answers
It's driving me insane
Putting my shoes on
I've decided to run away
I realize now
There's no reason for me to stay
It seems like I'm
Always in the way
I'm leavin this place
And I gotta leave today
If only you knew
How much i hate you
I can't go on this way
I've got so much i've got to say
I hate you
With every fiber of my body
Every time you diss me
I die a lil inside
Everytime you drink
I run away and hide
I turn the lights off
And hope that you won't hear
I'm tired of this
I hate living in fear
I've gotta get out
I'm gunna shout
GOODBYE!
I can't stand you anymore
And I hope that you will die
You
Are driving me insane
I will return the favor
Of giving me all this pain
I'm getting up
I'm getting back at you
For all the crap
That you put me through
You're goin to Hell
And i'll be there really soon
I'm giving it back
I don't want all this pain
I'm goin crazy tonight
And nothing's gunna be the same!
Copyright ©
Jakenstein
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2004-12-05 12:14:14]
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Re: Pain
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by EternalNight4x on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:45:27 PM AEST
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| well expressed, excellent write keep it up |
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Re: Pain
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:05:15 PM AEST
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It is dark and scarey. I felt the pain going through myself as I read it. It was creepy and spiteful. I like it alot. Dark is the only way to discribe it. Keep up the good work!
-Tsubaki T. |
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Re: Pain
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:15:43 AM AEST
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| I have such a great family also! Great write, You express emotions that I have felt on a number of occasions. |
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