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surroundings
Contributed by
justinslilsexy
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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surrounded
surrounded by faces
faces of disapointment
faces of people that I love
people who put me through this grief
people who meant no harm but caused it all
caused this blinding pain
caused the quiet nights when all you hear is the drop of my tear on the on the paper
a paper expaining all of my pain
all of my sorrow, bottled up inside
so i surround myself in pictures, when The fake smiles or semi-real hapiness can stay forever..........surrounding me
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Re: surroundings
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by pixie on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:26:27 AM AEST
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well expressed poem, alot of feelings in this write, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: surroundings
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:14:50 AM AEST
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| I think I share your feelings of things closing in on me or surrounding me as well. I feel ya'.. good poem |
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