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Georgia On My Mind
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:17:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Tall noble trees of pine
soil of orange clay
scent of rain
flows through the air
on this chilly Georgia day.
It has such a feel
of days long past
Southern belles, sweet mint tea
Civil war and slavery.
What stories could these
hills contain?
What tales could be spun?
Let me walk through
your mysterious mists
let the weave
be unwound.
Mystery seeps
from each darkened patch
of this ancient
southern ground.
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2004-12-05 10:17:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Willofree on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:31:31 AM AEST (User
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That's a fabulous write. It made me feel like I was actually there. The wording was very graphic and vivid.
Great write
Willofree |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:42:30 AM AEST (User
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gosh, this is a beautiful poem about my hometown. you must love her like i do! great job and you have great talent. |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:58:03 AM AEST (User
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Good write.
Creates awonderful atmosphere... |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:35:54 PM AEST (User
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You know I gotta tell you from someone else who lives in Georgia..I do not think it is the Mecca you make it..Not bad but Christ there are much better places in the South then here.. |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:56:20 PM AEST (User
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Very lovely...you make it sound like a wonderful place.....
Jenni |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Taurusgem1 on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:16:58 PM AEST (User
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Although, I am not a big fan of Rhyming poetry this one is good |
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Re: Georgia On My Mind
(User Rating: 1 ) by pooper on
Friday, 18th January 2008 @ 06:00:59 AM AEST (User
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Well written as it brings country visions to my mind.
I like parts of Georgia and especially the golf courses. |
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