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The Gentlest Touch
Contributed by
necronomy
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Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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Have you ever felt so sensitive,
That even the most delicate touch,
Proved to be too much?
Have you ever felt so exposed,
Deep down in your soul,
That no matter what you feel,
It causes you to reel?
When there isn’t a touch,
That’s gentle enough,
When even a bit of cherubim fluff,
Tears at you like a wire brush?
Have you ever felt so naked as to hide,
Yourself from every prying eye?
Feeling like the whore,
That everyone abhors,
And the only comfort,
That they offer,
Is when they want more.
I wonder if you’ve ever withdrew inside your shell,
And if you did would you ever tell?
Cause some things hurt just so much,
That they can’t be tended,
Not by the gentlest touch.
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2002-11-25 11:30:00]
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 11:34:04 AM AEST
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Well you've described me to a tee.. Thanks for sharing this one it's caused me to cry badly...
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by spaceotter on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 04:41:55 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:24:55 AM AEST
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| awesome poem :*) |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:06:03 PM AEST
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Withdrew into my shell? You mean I can come out and then go back again??!!
Yes, I understand this poem.
YS |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by wordsy on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 09:40:14 PM AEST
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A good read. well worded with fetching imagery.
wordsy. |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 05:48:00 AM AEST
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Dear Necronomy @-<-<<
An excellent write and a great many thoughts behind it.. I do so love your style..
*giggles* at what Yellow Sundragon said and tends to agree lol
Your writing friend always Nessa |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by mckayla on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 01:29:29 AM AEST
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I feel what you are saying great write!
mckayla |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:45:29 AM AEST
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| awesome beautiful description of a feeling |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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Wow..what an awesome poem... This is a very good description of a feeling that many share..
Jenni |
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Re: The Gentlest Touch
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:13:08 AM AEST
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wow, you said it so well, the emotion in this write is amazing. i love this one.
kara |
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