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Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:09:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i have no memories,
i just have regrets,
i have lessons learnt the long wy,
and this is as good as it's gonna' get,
and when they said i hd hope in my life,
did they mean it this way?
and when they said the deed wasnt done,
did they mean id die another day?
drunk and gone on aspiration,
hung and quatered in aggrivation,
dead and burried in deprivation,
my brain is in hiding,
left me alone,
no direction,
no path of my own,
yesterday's a day gone,
ive looked up to the next,
i have have moved swiftly on,
as ive given it my best,
ive remembered one thing,
a thing that gets me through,the things i do need,
my love its you
drunk and gone on aspiration,
hung and quatered in aggrivation,
dead and burried in deprivation,
my brain is in hiding,
left me alone,
no direction,
no path of my own,
if im gonna loose you baby,
il fall right to my knees,
dont try to reject it honey,
just listen to my pleas,
if your gona walk away,
just leave through the door,
ive already drowned my mind in grieving,
please dont give me anymore
drunk and gone on aspiration,
hung and quatered in aggrivation,
dead and burried in deprivation,
my brain is in hiding,
left me alone,
no direction,
no path of my own...
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2004-12-05 08:09:30]
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Re: Empty
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:27:24 AM AEST
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| I think that love is severely overrated, why is it that for a feeling that is supposed to bring much contentments we see all too often the casualties of love lying through life's battlefields...hmmm maybe it is because love is indeed the stupid game played by our all too human vanities... why do we let it affect us so. My thought is let us all consign it to the dumpster of emotional discard and life freely without its unwanted influence...and in being so be all the more happy for it...hmm at least I think it would. |
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Re: Empty
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by sunshiny on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:59:54 PM AEST
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| I think this is great! It would make a wonderful song. I look forward to reading your other work! |
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Re: Empty
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by dtborchert on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:20:01 AM AEST
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| Love is not overrated. And as you well know, it is better to have loved and lost than not had those woderful extreme feelings of tingling excitement and utter anticipation at seeing someone again. LIfe has a funny way of opening a new chapter when each one closes.Don't give up on love. Love is faith and without it there is no compassion, tolerance or hope in our crazy world. |
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