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Time
Contributed by
keugeot
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:18:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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time...
mathematicly determined reality,
the bounding linearity of life,
nature's brutality.
a moment...
spent with you, no clock
can meassure, the eternity
of love and pleasure.
a moment...
all alone... either too short,
either much too long...
whatever you do is wrong,
you're out of time,
no matter the effort.
i need more time
to live... to laugh, to cry,
to make a difference
I NEED MORE TIME.
Copyright ©
keugeot
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2004-12-05 06:18:53]
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Re: Time
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:40:28 AM AEST
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| Cool concept...time the eternal river indeed. I agree with you "I NEED MORE TIME". But I guarantee you that if given more time we would still waste it...and do everything all the same...for we humans lack any appreciation of the great chance that is our lives.... |
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Re: Time
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by Summerwine on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:35:04 AM AEST
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| You hit the nail on the head! I don't have enough time . look in the mirror hmmm...there's too much time on that face, need to make time, I want more time too! I loved this...thx |
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Re: Time
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:24:54 PM AEST
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Great write....Thanks for sharing it..
Jenni |
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