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When I met death
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone2
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:25:59 AM in AEST
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what if i never get him?
what if im left behind,
a sniveling mess,
pride stripped so i cant find,
a broken heart,
a burnt out flame,
a wreck of dignity,
crashed down on to the hard surface,
with the force of the tempest storms of the seas,
pain enough to break my bones,
il drown into the sand,
and wait for death,
hell come with his sythe,
and tell me it's not over yet,
do i need to endure this pain to feel love,
do i have to pay the price?
death shakes his head,
his blackened heart filled with demise,
'i cant mess with love young maiden, i cant toutch what is not for my black heart,
i can take my blade, and bring you your final blow, but how do you know his love will never start, just because of the darkness today, dosent woe a bright tommorow, wait a little longer, dont kill yourself with sorrow"
and with that death will glide away,
into the darkness,
whilst i cry and beg him to stay,
but the man is busy,
cupids my only bet,
but i cannot toy with his arrows,
but they say if you want something enough,
maybe thats what you will get,
but how can i fill a heart with love,
if it is drained with regret?
i stand to my feet,
look up at the bleak horizon,
i start the journey with one step,
down the same trail,
depravity lane,
love rats road,
heading for the sun,
all on my own...
empty and hurt,
distraught and pained,
hes given the other girl his heart,
he dosnt even know i love him,
i am powerless and drained...
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Re: When I met death
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by veenu on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:54:19 AM AEST
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ah...................your words haunted me but u use a criss cross of vocabulary..........................
make it simple and innocent...................
whatever great write...........
keep sharing naveen |
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Re: When I met death
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:04:50 AM AEST
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Very strong write!
Great writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: When I met death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:57:55 AM AEST
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Very powerful and well written well done.
Johnny. |
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Re: When I met death
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:23:28 AM AEST
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This is such a sad powerful write, i admire you strength to write such a beautiful poem like this. Well done.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: When I met death
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by sunshiny on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:20:57 PM AEST
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'i cant mess with love young maiden, i cant toutch what is not for my black heart,
i can take my blade, and bring you your final blow, but how do you know his love will never start, just because of the darkness today, dosent woe a bright tommorow, wait a little longer, dont kill yourself with sorrow"
This brought tears to my eyes. I am in awe of how you express yourself with your words and the originality your poetry contains...My heart goes out to you... |
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