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To My Knight
Contributed by
vanessamay
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:40:29 AM in AEST
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So to you I write
For being my Knight
In shining armour
That I could see so perfectly bright
You took me away
From all of the pain
That was to be felt
If alone on a train
With one little dance
You settled my glance
Across the room
Where someone played
All the tricks of the trade
To be in with the crowd
That were so loud
If that someone could only see
What it was,
They were doing to me
So that was the sword
that cut through my flight
It certainly hurt less
Thanks to my Knight
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vanessamay
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2004-12-05 01:40:29]
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Re: To My Knight
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:16:21 AM AEST
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| lovely intention, but i think the rhyming cheme wasnt effective, byt still, a very nice intention a lovely poem all round. |
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Re: To My Knight
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:44:06 AM AEST
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This is really a sweet poem
usually i try to be the knight but end up being the beast |
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