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What happened to us?
Contributed by
vanessamay
on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:28:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please Mum
let me bring home this boy
I just want to show
How much he'll enjoy
When I rip open my shirt
and expose my chest
I'm sure he'll agree
I have two of the best
But I can't leave it there
Without one more chance to stare
Down falls the skirt
To lay beside my shirt
His eyes widen
As I broaden his horizon
Now that all is on show
It is time for this boy to go
So just you leave on a high
and on the way out,
When passing my mum
Don't forget to say bye
Now that you're gone
You won't ever come back
Cos you're afraid to face
that well known fact
You left me so awkwardly
Alone and abused
I did not blame you
For being so confused
So why did I care?
You seemed fine
I knew it was coming
It was all a matter of time
Still I refused to see
What it was,
You were trying to get through to me
I thought we would make it
I thought we'd see it through
You left me with a good bye call
I didn't even get to see the real you
So before you flee
These are my last words
Please don't forget
About me
Copyright ©
vanessamay
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2004-12-05 01:28:37]
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Re: What happened to us?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:38:19 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
It's a bit sad but written like a profetional.
Keep writing.
luv, huggs, smy |
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Re: What happened to us?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:45:23 AM AEST
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very well done, and welcome to ypdc.
Johnny. |
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Re: What happened to us?
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:37:31 AM AEST
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I really like this its writen very well, i love your ryming style. Welcome to YDPC hope to see more of your work soon.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: What happened to us?
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 01:47:36 AM AEST
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| this is a great write even a bit comical in the wording and i am sure he wont forget |
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