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Change, the most beautiful
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:51:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Change, the most beautiful,
My saving grace,
I found you in a future,
10,000 miles from this place
that drove me to madness, sadness,
derangement,
A scrap of great yearning, then
bitter estrangement,
And not to say the
Journey was lost;
A futile gesture, surely not!
I found a few of my selves
On the way, and had to find one
That I’d be someday,
Ineffable ends
find sighs and grins
to greet them in their coming,
and mine is no different
suffice it to say,
I bid my leave to the old world today
Change, the most beautiful,
Your Winds, may I borrow,
To bestow on myself the great gift of Tomorrow?
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TheSchroedmeister
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:20:40 AM AEST
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| aw, its sad isnt it? but yes tommorow is always there. good write |
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:52:40 AM AEST
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I missed this, and your recent submissions. I'm glad I found it now...
You are improving, I can tell.
This was more than excellent, Schroed. |
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:18:42 AM AEST
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So many people get stuck in the heart break and don't see the growth. Others, like me, see it, but can seldom put it into words. Then there are those such as yourself who can do both and do it with eloquence.
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by neveryours on
Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 05:53:50 PM AEST
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I found a few of my selves
On the way, and had to find one
That I’d be someday,
I liked this - thanks to Neptunes for pointing it out in the forum.
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 15th December 2004 @ 12:04:09 AM AEST
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So very true... a 'journey' is never a wasted venture. I particularly like the opening stanza here... it is very nearly enough on its own.
Nicely done!
Glad to see you posting again!
~SNM~ |
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by purecitrus on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:35:32 PM AEST
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You commented on my poem so I looked up some of yours - this is wonderful!! Thanks for your input...
Katie |
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Re: Change, the most beautiful
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:11:24 PM AEST
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Oh, I just breathed this one in. This is one where I can say that I have been there, and I'm so glad I was. Never felt or read it expressed like this before though. More good stuff, and thank you for sharing it.
Stitch |
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