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story of my life
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You came
You saw
You left me
Story of my life
You raped
I bled
I scard me
Story of my life
You died
I cried
It hurt me
Story of my life
I break
You see
Gun kills me...
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2004-12-04 23:12:59]
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Re: story of my life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:14:52 PM AEST
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| An unusual style you have yet still painting a very visual and clear picture, full of sadness and pain. |
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Re: story of my life
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:49:32 PM AEST
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| i agree with dragon. good write. |
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Re: story of my life
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by Jenn2004 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:05:30 AM AEST
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| I agree with Dragon good write |
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