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Love Is Pain
Contributed by
hoist1atca
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What place is this, I have reserved for you?
Deep within a heart,
A fool’s palace, not so solid.
Once my own, now yours to control…
Built not of mortar strong-
This foundation stands so weak.
For loves embrace, only a mere deception-
Now hides within the illusions of hope…
Moments shared in times now past,
Are only tears shed in the darkness of night-
For memories weigh heavy upon a heart,
Given freely only to be cast aside and left to die…
Desire has clouded a mind once clear,
And cast aside all thoughts with reason-
What now remains is all to true,
In the end, love is only pain…
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hoist1atca
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2004-12-04 22:53:12]
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Re: Love Is Pain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:04:11 PM AEST
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This is a poem I can really relate to...but for me I gave up on love..a long time ago.
Awesome poem, well written well chosen words, each descibing the way you feel clearly, beautifully woven and excellenly composed...keep the words flowing. |
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Re: Love Is Pain
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:51:46 AM AEST
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| Amen to that ..love is pain and the ultimate time-waster... let us let it lie buried and enjoy the other things in life. Like wine, women and song. |
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