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darkness
Contributed by
eternityandaday4u
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the darkness behind the shadows
her mask begins to fade
her dreams are slowly broken
she hides where lost hopes are made!
lost in her own reflection
no where to run
face it your trapped
your game is done!
her life has no meaning
stuck in between
shes playing in her past
her blood no longer clean!
so who will cry for her world
shes battered and beaten to the ground
who will help this little girl
when no is around!
who will cry for her
she hides behind her mask
who will help this little girl
she failed her every task!
who will cry for this little girl
her own true self she tried to be
who will help this little girl
who fights in side of me!
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Re: darkness
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:15:37 PM AEST
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I know these thoughts-n-fellings.
I wrote one named SCREAMING INSIDE.
Keep writing as this is a masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: darkness
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:20:39 PM AEST
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| Another awesome write, you have an awesome talent for using words that scream out pleas, and turn poems into reality...very visual keep on writing...it is a true outlet. |
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Re: darkness
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:06:49 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: darkness
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 03:57:23 PM AEST
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wow...i mean that's all i can say! truly awesome...
- Beth - |
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