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villence.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Like vulture they gether to
feast on my bones.
they fly in circle like eagle watching every thing.
just like a snake they pretend not to be awake
and like killerwhale they attact without mercy or grace.
one must really have faith to survive these troubling days.
like shark they circle again for a taste,
and without warning they stuck,leaving dust in their wake,
no hidding place.
its a dog eat dog world ,they would say.
one must look at business in a whole new way.
the pulse and pressure to succeed,at all cost would make one bleed.
but if one don't try were would we be.
life on the street is not so sweet.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2004-12-04 20:15:14]
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Re: villence.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:10:15 PM AEST
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Awesome write, my friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: villence.
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:14:46 PM AEST
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| Well written and an awesome poem, though this poem reminded more of problems here than on the streets, spent 4 years on the streets, though hard got used to it...and left my mark, beautifully written poem. |
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Re: villence.
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by bluebird on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:05:12 AM AEST
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| love the style,its an impacting piece of writing,but i have to agree with kindredblood_dragon,it reminded me what it was like on the streets (8yrs and still goin) |
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