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Living A Lie

Contributed by BabyFacedAngel2010 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:26:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Living a lie is what my life consit of.
Im happy now:Later *!****...but i'll tell you im ok.
I cant find happyness:Idont understand this life.
I'm living a lie.
You say you care:You say you love me...
But is it me whos living the lie or are you following through.?
I wake up everyday:Nightmears sourund me!...
I need help:Ineed gudence.
Im living a lie...
You think you know me,so dont I but really deep down
in side im just living a lie.
It keeps growing!
STOP i wanna shout but it keep on and on...
Then I see a light...its beuatful...Away out..??
Acually its just the light telling me to keep on:so i prossed...
Then I fall...and fall... STOP i finally shout but no one is there,
There gone:when I've finally found my way out...
What do I do...I try to find them and end up back...
Living A Lie!.....

Copyright © BabyFacedAngel2010 ... [ 2004-12-04 19:26:22]
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Re: Living A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:38:36 PM AEST
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Hmmm....Definitly not bad, but not as great as it could be...take more time to type it, and you will get your point across much more clear...I did like it though

Mason

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