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Floating
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 02:19:08 PM in AEST
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where the purple mist meets
the green hills.
that is where i will be.
until you return and bring me
back home.
i will float there.
unnoticed, unprotected.
my bones are cold.
my cries cannot be heard...
there is no one for miles.
padded purple
muffles my screams.
i cannot find a hand hold
the blackness squeezes
until i die
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Re: Floating
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 03:56:24 PM AEST
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Are you dying ? waiting for the second coming. I didn't quite understand it,but that is me.--keep writing
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Re: Floating
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 12:23:55 AM AEST
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| Like reading to different poems...one in bold shows emtions pleas, and in the light silent torture....awesome poem. |
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