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Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
Contributed by
Kreeping_Beauty
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I know you didn’t mean to make me cry
The way you pulled my heart into a useless lie
Its killing me but I know you don’t mean it
Who actually believes in this stupid love bullsh*t
I didn’t till the rain poured down
& you weren’t there for me to run into your arms
The lightning foreshowed your hurtful charms
I love you so much my life revolves around you
For what you don’t whisper & for what you don’t do
Another sad love story with no real ending
Letters & messages are always left pending
I love you though you bring me nothing but failed dreams
Of broken hearts & fateful screams
Please spare me these last three dying words
‘I love you’ I choke but you never heard
Copyright ©
Kreeping_Beauty
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2004-12-04 13:04:34]
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:05:40 PM AEST
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a very deep write, pained and sad,
pixie xx |
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by MMISS on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:16:08 PM AEST
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| great writing here! look forward to more. |
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:19:43 PM AEST
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| that is so sad. what a great write!!!!!!! |
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by AbnormalPunk on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 02:28:57 PM AEST
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amazing.... the last two lines were breathtaking... i loved it... keep em coming
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by Jenn2004 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 04:50:25 PM AEST
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| Great write, most people including myself gets blinded in love that they cannot see and ends up getting hurt. |
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Re: Failed Dreams Of Broken Hearts
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by smilez101 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:24:41 PM AEST
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| that was a really beautiful poem my mo9uth dropped open when i finished reading it |
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