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i think i love him...(what do you think?)

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:13:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

i think i love him,
i think im going mad,
im in enemy lines,
im in a mine field,
running for a crime of passion,
fighting for my life,
skipping for my crush,
racing for my heart,
escaping for my joy,
sprinting regardless of the pain,
through the fields,
just to see him again,
i must weave in and out of bombs,
but i know il have to sacrifice a few,
in and out of danger,
keep my lips sealed,
il be fine if im dreaming of my prize,
dreaming of my jurney,
dreaming of my goal,
my destination isnt confirmed,
its like an island floating above my head, only by luck could he throw down a rope to let me get inside and get to him,
but this rope needs to be made of the golden threads of love,
how do i know if he could ever find them,
he has plenty of them in his closet for her,
could he ever grow some for me?

i musnt scream in lust,
i musnt show my fear,
i musnt recite the truth,
but i will jump my best over the fire,
i hold my dress in my hand,
as i leap from chance to chance
i think i love him,

my foe will trace my route,
catch me red handed,
catch me were i stand,
a love rat a crush bandit,
but ill fight to pass her,
il avoid her trail,
il do my best to be who iam,
so he can love me as i am,
love me for what i am,
a hero?
a saint?
a fiend?
or just a thorn in his side?
if only he would feel the same,
realise hes not in love with her,
run to catch my hand,
together we may face their bombs,
but as long as we look out in the same direction,
maybe we can grow strong,
i think i love him,
but if i dont get him soon,
il be dead before long

i think i love him...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone ... [ 2004-12-04 12:13:22]
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Re: i think i love him...(what do you think?) (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:20:36 PM AEST
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great story! i like the methphor alot. keep up the good work.
5 stars!

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