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Teenage Broken Heart

Contributed by ladyjaylee20 on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:10:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

C'mon tell me you hate me, i don't give a damn, tell me I'm not your type, then I won't hang around, tell me I'm not pretty enough, then I'll walk away, tell me I'm a little too chubby, I haven't got all day.

Tell me how you really feel, I haven't got the rest of my life, Tell me what you really mean, I haven't got time for your timid lies,

Hey I'm tough I can take it, Its not like I've never heard it before, Hey coming from you it, would be a blessing that you don't consider me one of your whores,

God you infuriate me, stop wrapping it up with all those polished little lines, I'm not so damn naive, that I can't reconize it this time,

No don't touch me, don't try to make it better, don't try to make me see, things from your point of view. You don't give a damn about my feelings, why should I give a care about you.

No not this time, I'm not going to listen to all of your lies, baby I'm sorry she was just there and you were tied up with something else, no i won't let you treat me like its my fault you can't keep your hands to yourself, theres the door, go'on walk away I haven't got time for your lies today....Poem by Jamie.

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Re: Teenage Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:25:10 AM AEST
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C'mon tell me you hate me, i don't give a damn, tell me I'm not your type, then I won't hang around, tell me I'm not pretty enough

that is exactly how i feel with his boy, but hes in love with another girl and shes in love with him, but im in love with him, but shes known his longer, i cant trust anyone and so i would look like a fool to tell anyone, i want him, i need him, id give everything for him just to open up and be his real self and love me like he loves her. only time will ease my pain.
angry write. good. straight falward.
m inspired....

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