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I'll forever hate you
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:45:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Giggling down the stairs of the lighthouse
Having so much fun
Laughing so much Ive got a stitch
As down the steps we run
Jess and Rosie are in front of me
But I cannot let them win
So I push them over and sprint down
With a big juicy grin
I get to the bottom of the house
To the post, the finishing line
Theres no-one else there but me
YES! The title is finally mine!
Upstairs I heard a scream
'That must be Rosie' I thought
She always gets angry when beaten
'Shes so spoilt' I thought
For the next 5 minutes I kept hearing screams
'She must be having a tantrum' I decided
'I don't wanna go up, in case she hits me
So I'll wait til its all subsided'
I waited for a couple of minutes
I was getting so bored
I shouted 'Are you done yet?!?!'
But she started screaming more and more
'Ok' I thought 'I'll leave them to it
'I'll wait down here a bit longer'
Suddenly I heard another scream added
And the noise level got stronger
'Jess' probably getting frustrated'
I assumed that was true
I thought about going up to help
But thought 'what good would it do?'
I stayed downstairs for a while longer
I was really angry by now
The screams were becoming louder and shriller
The joke wasnt funny now
I stomped up the stairs, absolutely raging
'They are gonna get it' I said
I heard the screams coming from inside a door
I slammed it open. 'WILL YOU ST-...' I stopped dead
I was standing in a shaggy room
The walls and carpets were faded red
There was nothing else really in the room
Apart from a red and white bed...
I saw them both sprawled on the bed
And a man was lying on Jess
I don't know what he was doing
I could hear the squeak of the mattress
He turned around to look at me
He smiled at me and said:
'Come to watch the show?'
He laughed as Jess bled
I didn't know what to say
I smiled an awkward smile
I didn't know what he was doing
But thought I might as well stay a while
I watched as he moved up and down
I watched as she screamed
I watched as Rosie cried
I watched as he beamed
I watched as Rosie tried to move
I watched as the blood spread
I watched as Jess shouted for me
But I couldnt move; I was shocked dead
I didn't know what he was doing
But I knew something was wrong
I tried to think of what it was
But he stopped just before long
He got off of Jess
And rolled off the bed
He pulled his pants up
'I had a good time' he said
He did up his belt
And set towards the door
He chuckled then turned round
To cry 'Goodbye my little whores'
When he came up to me
He put his finger to his mouth
'Dont tell a soul, promise?'
And slid past me to go out
Only then did I realise what he'd done
I tried to scream but nothing came out
He tried to hurt my two best friends
I wanted to run after him and shout
But I couldn't move or do anything
All I could do was look straight ahead
Emotions exploding inside me
The events replaying in my head
Rosie and Jess were lying there
All they could do was cry
I wished that I could make it better
But I can't; even if I try
...I woke up, finding myself crying and screaming
Jess and Rosie were only eight
I then knew that day would haunt me forever
That day I'll forever hate
Copyright ©
Kitty_cat
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Re: I'll forever hate you
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:11:05 AM AEST
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wow... i don't know about everyone else... but this did give me a shock... it was a great poem... sad... but really good... i just hope this never really happened...
hope to c more from u soon
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: I'll forever hate you
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by In2thetwilightzone on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:20:44 AM AEST
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| this is a breath taking poem, thrilling and extremely eyecatching and keeps you on the edge of your seat, i waths thrilled and shrilled. the child pornography and the child abuse and the rape all wrapped into the english language as best words can discribe for this hideous disgrace... what a wonderful writer you are, and what brilliant rhymes |
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Re: I'll forever hate you
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by Evilnn on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:21:04 AM AEST
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WOW!!!
That was awsome and eerriiee
amazing.
EVE |
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