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teardrops in her coffee
Contributed by
MMISS
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:18:37 AM in AEST
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teardrops in her coffee
she walked outside to get the mail
and then poured coffee
from the pot she just made
and as she sat down at the table
she noticed a letter addressed to jane
they were drippin in her coffee cup
as she read that dear jane letter
no matter how hard she tried
she couldn't continue til she felt better
she just had to keep on
despite how she was feelin
it took everything she had
to wipe her eyes and go on readin
the coffee cup ran over
as she filled it up with tears
remembering every i love you
what did it mean all those years
the tears she shed seemed useless
as she cried her heart into
droppin teardrops in her coffee cup
was all she seem to do
well she finished that old letter
and broke down in tears and pain
it was too much for her to handle
that letter addressed to jane
yes she cries teardrops in her coffee cup
every now and then
and if any body knows it
i sure do
because my name is jane
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MMISS
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:20:47 AM AEST (User
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wow you have really excelled yourself with this, it was amazing, truly amazing,
pixie xx |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by vallie_val on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:26:13 AM AEST (User
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wow awesome!!and i like this combination "teardrops in her coffee"..i dunno why but i do |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by smilez101 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:24:57 AM AEST (User
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that was a really good poem |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:53:45 AM AEST (User
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wow, this is a really amazing poem. I love the title and the last stanza, its very powerful I reckon.
cat xxx |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:33:53 PM AEST (User
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Loved the title....wonderful write..
Jenni |
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Re: teardrops in her coffee
(User Rating: 1 ) by antfarmer on
Monday, 24th October 2011 @ 07:12:48 AM AEST (User
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keep writing, good job |
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