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Her
Contributed by
Strawberry_Stitch
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:48:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I like to make deep gashes in my skin
Like to watch the sour blood drip down my pale arms
I can feel her overtake me now
Her teeth grow jagged and sharp
Her eyes go blurry and red
Her nails grow into claws
She likes to rip at things
dont you see?
The demon inside tells me i cant win
They show my their evil charm
I feel her scowl
While she makes my mind warp
She lays me down on the bed
while she takes out the ragged saw
She tells me not to blink
I like to see blood dont you agree?
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Re: Her
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:54:25 AM AEST
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deep and dark, sorry you feel like this, well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Her
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by MMISS on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:10:26 AM AEST
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| deep , dark, and bone chilling. good write! |
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Re: Her
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by vallie_val on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:28:39 AM AEST
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| great job i think |
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Re: Her
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by pyro_88 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:23:38 PM AEST
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| very well written. i can really relate to this poem. thanks for submitting it. |
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