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Please..no more pain
Contributed by
sian
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 03:49:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Not you again
You've caused me too much pain
I can not fight
I've tried with all my might
Is that the devil in your eye?
How can you do this then lie?
The door does knock
and this is how you block
"I'm sorry shes asleep
your message will have to keep."
Im not asleep!
Im cutting - deep!
You knock my door
as I lay on my floor
Im not asleep...I've made my leap!
Copyright ©
sian
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2004-12-04 03:49:23]
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Re: Please..no more pain
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by MMISS on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:50:10 AM AEST
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| would'nt it be great idf we could change the past! good job. enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: Please..no more pain
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 05:42:48 AM AEST
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Deep write i can see the blood. Keep writing
GREAT WRITE
~DENNIS~ |
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