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Let Go
Contributed by
Broken_Wingz
on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 03:27:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I have tried my best to let go,
but still I dream of you.
I must force myself to realize
that we are really through.
It's been two years and I'm still stuck,
in this place I don't belong.
In my heart and in my mind,
I know that this is wrong.
So like the emptiness of a beat
that truely does not exist,
I will finally say good-bye
and you will not be missed.
If I trick myself into believing
that you were never there,
then my heart will no longer break
and I will cease to care.
So this is my farewell
to what I will never know.
My heart and soul are free,
for I have finally let go.
Copyright ©
Broken_Wingz
... [
2004-12-04 03:27:03]
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Re: Let Go
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 03:51:44 AM AEST
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I know what your feeling with this write, i went thru the same thing when i broke up with my ex. This is such a great poem you have shown your feelings well with this piece.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Let Go
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:03:30 PM AEST
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| this poem really hits home with me. i have loved, or at least i think loved, this girl i know for the last 2 years. i recently found out that she is moving from minnesota to oregon so i have to move on with my life and try my hardest to seperate myself from the feelings i have for her, its gonna be tough. great poem |
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