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I remember
Contributed by
miss_erika
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Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:03:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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He was only 14
the day he passed away
I remember when they told me
there were no other words to say.
I remember how we loved him
until the day of his death,
and how we all stood beside him
as he took his final breath.
i remember the look in his mothers eyes,
as he laid there motion less.
I remember when she said " i love you"
and gave him one last kiss.
I remember at the cemetary
everyone stood around
and watched silently
as they laid him in the ground.
I remember ive never seen
anyone cry so much before,
and how i wont get
to see his smile anymore.
I remember on that day
everyones heart was tore
he was born in 1990
and died in 2004.
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2004-12-04 00:03:48]
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Re: I remember
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:17:09 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
I'm so sorry for your loss.
He sounded like a beautifull angel soaring.
luv, huggs, strength,
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Re: I remember
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:13:38 AM AEST
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| This is absolutely beautiful. I'm sorry about your loss. |
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