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Scared
Contributed by
Sheener
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:25:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Scared
I’m shaking really
Badly,
I had to much to
Drink
My visions getting
Blurry,
Its hard for me to
Think.
I wonder if they’ve
Noticed yet,
That I’m not up
In my
Bed
The pain is hurting
More now
Its stinging in my
Head
This pavements really
Cold,
I can barely
Breathe,
My breathe’s are getting
Shorter,
My chest is starting to
Heave.
I reach for my
Phone
In a desperate attempt
To call,
I hope you are awake
Right now
I need you most of
All
Your voice is very
Deep
And yet you still don’t
Know
I’m not up in my
Bed
And I’m breathing
Really slow
You grab your shoes
& jacket
You drive as fast as
You can
“Please by Okay” you
say
Just hold on to
My hand.
You lie there with me
On the ground
As we wait for help
To arrive
Suddenly you get
A feeling,
You know I’m no longer
Alive.
You still keep on holding
Me
As you lie there
And cry,
You keep on asking yourself
And God
Why? Why? Why?
I loved you so much
Daddy
I wish that you could
See
In my heart I’m crying
Too
Please, will you forgive
Me?
By: Sheena Marie Carnahan
Copyright ©
Sheener
... [
2004-12-03 23:25:19]
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Re: Scared
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:37:54 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful.. well done |
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Re: Scared
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:51:05 PM AEST
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| amazing write. powerful and emotional. |
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Re: Scared
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 04:19:24 AM AEST
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Wow this just made me tear up, this is such a sad powerfull write.
Hugs,
Jane |
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