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The Little Angel
Contributed by
Sheener
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The bruise is so Dark
It is planted on her eye
At night she lies awake,
Hoping god will answer her cry
She is too afraid to speak
Because her daddy might hear
The bruises she has rendered, increases all her fear
She sits in the corner and listens for the door
Her body is so weak
She doesn’t have the strength that she had before
A loud bang coming from downstairs
Means daddy has come home
She cowers in the corner shaking all alone
He hits her harder and harder
The blood begins to pour
She tries to run away, but he has locked the door
Suddenly all is quite
Her life-less body on the floor
Her soul has gone to the heavens
The little angel that will soar
This poem is sad but very true, it could’ve been me or you!!
Copyright ©
Sheener
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2004-12-03 23:23:49]
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Re: The Little Angel
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 12:02:12 AM AEST
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| excellent write. good endiing. its a little different than the usual lame ending of it was me. that ending is used far too much and its good to see something a little different. |
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Re: The Little Angel
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by AerandirA on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 10:12:19 AM AEST
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| I like the sorrow and the pain coming through. It was so clear and spoke directly to the heart. It sent chills up my spine. |
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