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Complexities of My Heart
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:28:08 PM in AEST
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Mingle my mouth with yours and feel like I am dying as
The toxin from the Oleanders poison takes effect
But not part my lips in this eternal kiss
I do not want to end this ephemeral bliss
But I do want to die and end this life tonight
And I would chose this death over
That of fire or ice because neither of them
Could ever compare to or describe what I am feeling now
More than twice blessed to be in love with you
But more than destroyed by the distance between us
As the old chasms in me are filled
New ones take their place
But they are sweeter and are not a burden
And still leave happiness in my soul
And a change in my face
Where a smile in now made its home
But I still feel alone
It really cannot be helped
So I hold you close from miles away
And promise you that I will not stray
This is a promise I will keep
For you life and mine and for
All eternity
please do visit my new blog
(http://kibaseyes.blogspot.com/)
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Re: Complexities of My Heart
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by girish on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:27:49 PM AEST
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Read my poem on "The Sorrow that Struck her" It more resembles your situation.
comments please
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Re: Complexities of My Heart
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:25:53 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i see youve changed and added some since last i read it. =] |
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Re: Complexities of My Heart
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:02:55 AM AEST
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This is really good,
Sorry I havent been around much this weekend.
Love
Stace xx |
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