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My World
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In my world
There are crowded streets
and the people are desolate,
Devoid of emotion
And in my world
There is a knife to everyone's back;
one false move and it will rain blood
In this life I see a prison
but the innocent are guilty
And the blamed are dead.
and no one could care less.
In my world
Tears are acid, burning your face
with a tingling delight
Throughout each morning--There remains no light
And in the night--What blinds is light
In my world
Truth is a lie
and smiling makes you die,
but we are not sad
here in my world--
(we just are)
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
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2004-12-03 21:01:43]
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Re: My World
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 10:10:05 PM AEST
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| ::stunned:: brilliant and amazing write. your world sounds like the real world. |
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Re: My World
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 11:04:10 PM AEST
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excellent piece
gotta see the "3 billygoats..." now
thanks for sharing |
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2012 @ 01:23:10 PM AEST
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Yeah, no kidding. without a doubt you are right on and it doesn't seem to be getting any better.
So where ya' been?
Tim |
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