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The sorrow that struck her
Contributed by
girish
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:33:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If life becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer
If my hand beats me, if my fingers poke my eyes
Having shed no tears, if my eyes should flow as a river
And for me, there is not even one person who cares
For this poor, judgement has eyes but has no vision
People are there who can witness cow as snake
But can they suck from cow`s belly, snake`s poison
What sin did I commit?, the sweat on my body will ask
If this becomes a puzzle, who will provide the answer
Where does the rain drops, falling on earth goes?
Which mind, do the relations we make really reach?
Atop from mountains, the Ganges, into the sea it flows
Follows the rule, that nature has given it as preach
Divine rule spells the formula of this man for this woman
But when my man changed the formula, arose the dispute
Change or relation and urge of possession, resolves when
If relation becomes a puzzle, who will provide the suite
When my hearts are your throne, do not go away
If you can look after me, no problems can arise
Having been your queen, eyes flow with tears today
When I wanted to sing all about your praise
If your presence becomes a puzzle, where is the answer
Copyright ©
girish
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2004-12-03 19:33:33]
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Re: The sorrow that struck her
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 11:34:36 PM AEST
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| mine is really about love from a far not a love fallen apart i dont like mine and yours is hard to dicifer |
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Re: The sorrow that struck her
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 01:11:27 AM AEST
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Awesome writing as always.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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