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alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
Contributed by
summers
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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empty sex and then a cigarette
you’ve got relationships like roadmaps that stretch across the world
complete with picturesque backdrops of some idealistic life you’ll never lead
i’ve got a bottle for every regret
and cirrhosis to ail my broken heart
like a train derailed
i’m knuckling through the dirt
feeling around for something
mildly familiar
and i’m drunker than i’ve ever been
choreographing my revenge.
scrawling in ink the slightest hint
to bring you misery.
but i forget
it’s useless
you’re inhuman
vengeance is wasted on the heartless.
Copyright ©
summers
... [
2004-12-03 17:05:45]
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Re: alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
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by girltranscended on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:33:16 PM AEST
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and i’m drunker than i’ve ever been
choreographing my revenge.
This rocks! And great title too! |
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Re: alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
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by girltranscended on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:33:52 PM AEST
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and i’m drunker than i’ve ever been
choreographing my revenge.
This rocks! And great title too! |
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Re: alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:40:25 PM AEST
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Wow . . . definitely earns the Best Poem I've Read Today award. Beautiful job; I could read this again and again and again. Actually, now that I think of that, I think I will. *goes off to reread*
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Re: alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:54:44 PM AEST
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| great poem! deep and funny too, |
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Re: alcohol, ink, and a need for firearms
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:34:47 PM AEST
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| awesome, i love it, well done |
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