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What Could Have Been
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't wanna be alone
but you're all I've been living for
and now you're gone
I've tried so hard
to make this work
I'm begging
yet you can't feel my hurt
I'm so in love
with what used to be
without you I'm dying
I just can't breathe
take me back
I love you
I wanna renew
what we had
cuz there are so many things
I'll never know
if you don't give me a chance
to let my love show
I'll be bleeding
until you return to me
and if you don't
I'll need you eternally
I'd give away my soul
just to kiss you once again
take me back
Please, I don't want this to end
cuz what we had was beautiful
but it had the chance to be
something wonderful
Copyright ©
bonita2689
... [
2004-12-03 16:10:05]
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Re: What Could Have Been
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:42:35 PM AEST
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| very good poem..Your very gifted.. |
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Re: What Could Have Been
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:49:03 PM AEST
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| hey this is sad and if i were him i would not have let you go |
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