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REMEMBER
Contributed by
lemmen
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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When you were a child
before you had friends.
Do you remember the
things you did.
Like climbing a tree.
Playing with the dog.
Just sitting in the grass
making paths for the ants.
Can you remember the childish
fun you had.
Playing hide and seek
with your mom and dad.
Just little things that
kept you happy and glad.
When you were a child and
only bumps and bruises
made you sad.
Do you ever wish you
could do it again.
Well, guess what
you just did
it again.
BY DENNIS LEMMEN
Copyright ©
lemmen
... [
2004-12-03 15:57:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: REMEMBER
(User Rating: 1 ) by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:18:59 PM AEST (User
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nice and sweet. |
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Re: REMEMBER
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:25:09 PM AEST (User
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really good... liked it a lot
hope to c more from u soon
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: REMEMBER
(User Rating: 1 ) by weepingwillow on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 05:32:42 PM AEST (User
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Excellent poem, man. I really enjoyed it, and you bring up a good point: revisiting your childhood can make one cheerful. Thanks for sharing the poem. |
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Re: REMEMBER
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST (User
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Lovely rite Dennis...thanks for the trip down memory lane
Hugs
Jenni |
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