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forever be
Contributed by
xxDeathxTOxKristixx
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:42:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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can't you see it hurts me more?
to see you walk right through the door?
to ignore me like we were never friend?
i guess it's where our true love ends...
why did you walk away from me?
why did you act like you didn't see?
you cast me out and locked the door..
proving life won't be life before..
you leave me alone and push me aside..
not knowing all the nights i cried..
not knowing how much i wanted you..
not knowing i wished you loved me too..
but now it's worse now that you love me..
but now that i know we can never be..
i have to say i disagree..
when you asked me to forever be..
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xxDeathxTOxKristixx
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2004-12-03 15:42:24]
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Re: forever be
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:55:36 PM AEST
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| sad and deep . great write. |
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Re: forever be
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by xMizeriex on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 03:47:57 PM AEST
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I can understand this perfectly. Great Poem.
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