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Equality of Humans
Contributed by
CaddishCut
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:33:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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We live
And we die
We smile
And we cry
We wake
And we sleep
We break
The promises we keep
Tell me your life story
Show me we're the same
Breathing is our mistake
Dying is life's game
We speak
And we hush
We build
And we blush
We cling
And let go
We lie
About feelings we don't show
Tell me your life story
Show me we're the same
Breathing is our mistake
Dying is life's game
Give me time to think
Give me space to rest
Give me thoughts to dream
Make life of the best
Give me reasons now
Life is such a mess
Give me room to drown
Relieve all your stress
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CaddishCut
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Re: Equality of Humans
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:38:04 PM AEST
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| good song. love to hear the music! |
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Re: Equality of Humans
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:19:14 PM AEST
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Nice one everybody's the same we all have to breath. Thats true, Great write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Equality of Humans
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by buchi on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 07:14:34 PM AEST
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| And give...This is thought provoking poem...I am still enjoying it...Keep em coming |
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Re: Equality of Humans
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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| simply amazing. |
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Re: Equality of Humans
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by Vermilion on
Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 09:40:39 AM AEST
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Oh.. this is wonderful.. absolutely wonderful. I can't think of a single bad thing to say about this.. You have talent. :) Keep up the good work..
This has really got me thinking.. which is unusual for someone like me. I don't like to think too much. Lol.
/Mili |
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