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Stalker
Contributed by
ladyjaylee20
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:46:51 PM in AEST
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sighs of regret
she would have been perfect
but shes just like the rest
she doesnt' love him
she doesn't want him
she doesn't know he exsists
but oh he knows about her
he knows her daily routine
an early riser
he likes that
a quick run in the park
home for a quick shower
and off with her day
he knows what she drives
the jaguar
an elegant choice
he watches her
desperate for her to live up
to his expectations
again he sighs
he really wanted this one
but she is just like the rest
caught up in herself
she wouldn't even give him a chance
he waits for her now
to return
she sees her sister on Wednesdays
she'll be home soon
and then as was meant to be
he must teach her the leason
that he has given to so many others
he hears the jaguar pull in to the drive
hmm...eleven thirty as always
right on time
he peaks out her attic window
and as he waits
blade in hand
he sighs
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Re: Stalker
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:03:09 PM AEST
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| this is scary. great story! |
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Re: Stalker
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by Pepper on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:16:51 PM AEST
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| Wow, that gave me chills.Great poem. |
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Re: Stalker
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by Lessa on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:20:34 PM AEST
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| maybe your meaning is diffrent from mine, but i loved this in many ways. good job my dear |
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Re: Stalker
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:25:36 PM AEST
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Nicely written the thoughts of a stalker and what he has and will do. I liked it.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Stalker
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:40:44 PM AEST
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| wow.. creepy.. well done!!! |
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