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It Hurts To Remember
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:52:06 PM in AEST
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It hurts me to remember you all,
You helped me when I suffered a fall,
When my parents couldn’t look after me,
I was put into care where I didn’t want to be.
But you made being separated easier to bear,
Because I knew that you would be there,
You gave your time to listen & advise,
Whereas others there would tell so many lies.
I left care when I was sixteen,
To go back home I wasn’t too keen,
As I had become comfortable where I was living,
But time was now not so forgiving.
You all have a special place inside of my heart,
You shown me care & feeling right from the start,
At night I often lay in bed & I think,
To remember hurts & makes my heart sink.
As I miss you all so very, very much,
It is a shame that we ever lost touch,
If I saw you I would show my thanks,
You helped me climb up some muddy banks.
This poem I dedicate to the genuine carers,
The ones who gave a ***** & were advice sharers,
To the rest of you, you can all burn in hell,
Thanks to you I know liars & false people too well.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:56:55 PM AEST
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| moving and deep thoughts. good work again. |
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by Overstated on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:01:57 PM AEST
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this was a powerful and profound poem pixie I've found myself reading it and then rereading it - i think you have managed to convey some difficult experiences in a deep meaning way. I hope you get the chance to say thanks to that person. When you wrote 'muddy banks' I thought the twist at the end was gonna be that this poem was all about Kurt Cobain!
This poem is brilliant and really got me thinking.
Rod
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by in2thetwilightzone2 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:22:34 PM AEST
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| great piece |
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 01:43:58 PM AEST
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ooh ooh pixie put a deleted swear word in her poem! i feel corrupted, now i'm gonna have to shake my head till all those nasty sweary words tumble out and my mind is pure again!
Seriously pix this is a well constructed poem, written with great feeling and emotion.
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 03:25:08 PM AEST
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Great write.....so full of emotions....
Hugs
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:01:57 AM AEST
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Very awesome writing!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: It Hurts To Remember
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 08:42:54 AM AEST
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This was a great write pixie. To expose and share one's inner self like that takes a lot of courage. You are a very brave soul. And with what you have endured, it is apparent that you have a lot of guts too!
Well done
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