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Sarrow
Contributed by
Jbounce85
on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Laying on a soft bad with
tears filling my eyes.
I let thoughts go through my mind
of depression and sarrow.
Loosing a friend to another
feels as though I lost more.
Memories and hope for what could have been
but what now is lost forever.
Falling back on a friend
was all that seemed left.
Until it all went wrong
for she left with another.
Watching two lovebirds
holding eachother tight.
I feel as though I lost something
that is undescribable.
Wanting to stop with it all,
be by myself to work things out.
Hurting those around me for
what I have done.
Tears continue to fill my eyes
knowing that everyone is so happy.
Yet I sit here sad and lonely
and I just wait...
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Jbounce85
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2002-11-25 01:30:00]
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Re: Sarrow
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by Chrissylee on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 03:45:45 AM AEST
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Its important for us as people to be able to express ourselves when we are feeling sad. Let the tears out let the sadness flow its really the only way to let your heart know that you have lost someone very dear to your soul and in doing this one day soon you will find happiness again.... without the sadness you would have never have written this lovely poem.
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Re: Sarrow
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by OreO on
Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 11:31:14 AM AEST
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This is so sad, i know what this feels like to sit and watch people in love like that.. it hurts and it hurts deeply..and i am one that can say i have hurt people around me for the pain i was going through and lashing out at them. Thanks for sharing this one, it has a strong grip on one's soul.
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