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Broken Angel Wings
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:51:25 AM in AEST
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My broken angel wings torn in two,
All because of an argument with you,
I hope one day they will mend,
One day into heaven me they will send.
All I’ve ever wanted was to fall,
Deep in love & have it all,
Now I have & sometimes I cause you pain,
I am really sorry & I don’t want to do it again.
It hurts to move as my wings are now broken,
After my hurtful words to you were spoken,
I wish I could take what I said back,
Instead of hate give you a love attack.
Will you forgive me I really hope you can?
I love you to bits you are the sweetest man,
There is no other like you who walks this earth,
Words can’t describe how much to me you’re worth.
Please lay on my pillow of love rest your head,
Always next to me you’ll curl up in bed,
With our love my wings can be fixed,
With the feelings of love, care & compassion mixed
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-12-03 07:51:25]
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Re: Broken Angel Wings
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by Willofree on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 07:58:42 AM AEST
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Pixie
Doing everything right is a hard thing to do, I think apologizing and forgiveness is the glue...
A beautiful poem in subject matter, rhyme and flow.
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Re: Broken Angel Wings
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 08:25:32 AM AEST
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Chalk up another good one pix.
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Re: Broken Angel Wings
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by MMISS on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 09:16:15 AM AEST
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| this poem is so sweet. you've really got the poetic touch pixie! |
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Re: Broken Angel Wings
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:25:08 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem written with such care and
heartache. I loved it.
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Re: Broken Angel Wings
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 07:55:37 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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