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tears
Contributed by
karmen
on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:53:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The tears are engulfing,
The pain is always near.
The laughter forever silenced,
And eternal is my fear.
Cause you are there,
and here no more.
Broken dreams and shattered glass,
All on the floor.
You left willingly,
I didn't make you go.
So the pain of abandonment,
I can never show.
All the things I would have done,
to have you by my side.
But now your gone, there's no one left
With whom I can confide
So I scribble little words,
on this paper that you read,
Hoping someone will take notice,
hoping one will take heed.
Thank you for loving me,
but today I let you go.
My love you keep forever,
My coive, you always know.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2004-12-03 00:53:06]
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Re: tears
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by RomanticSoul on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:11:17 AM AEST
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| Very good poem well written |
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Re: tears
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by LittleMANof04 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:23:44 AM AEST
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| very nicely written, i especially liked the 'i didn't make you go. so the pain of abandonment, i can never show' quite powerful. |
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Re: tears
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by girish on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 04:01:57 AM AEST
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good expression. more powerful.
don`t worry for the one who has left
world is yours and life is a gift
girish
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Re: tears
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by flash_16 on
Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:52:27 PM AEST
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| wow!this is a really good poem.i can relate to this very well.this is the poem i could relate to the most on this site...keep on posting |
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