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My Dove, Eternity Has Come, Lets Die Together

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:53:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

forgive me of my faults, oh beloved
since doves were meant to fly
why cant you get yourself up off the ground
your troubles are not the end of eternity

alas, my heart was broken just for you to mend
beyond a friend your life means to me
your life is my lifes ambitions to please
your embrace is more than what i can embrace

trust is not what i held in my heart in the past
this screenplay we live is not our lives
an act we avoided in the past but not right now
you show me how to live the life of a fairy tale

beyond what we see through our eyes
lines of betrayal have been erased
your face lines my thoughts throughout my eternity
giving around the thought of love

this ghost of past loves is haunting my dreams
but it seems to be overrun by the truth of you
double the depth of emotion inside of me
hold strong my dove, for eternity has not yet started

beyond a glimpse of a setting sun you lie
in wreaths of flowers crowning your soul
alone you sit, waiting for me, breathing love
please begone oh child of lust, i love your pain my dear

handed to me was your heart fragile and unmarked
right was the way we chose to stumble upon
for now we love eachother and know it to hold forever
my dove, eternity has come, lets die together

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2004-12-02 21:53:03]
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Re: My Dove, Eternity Has Come, Lets Die Together (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 12:00:32 AM AEST
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A wonderful title that houses a beautiful
poem. I loved this wonderfull and very
poetically crafted. Loved it all.

Bobo (Joel)

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