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Enclosue

Contributed by socialburnin on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

You were nothing without
Your fake dramatic shouts
Caught up in the pieces
Of each broken life you led
All I wanted was
To see if you werent just a figment
Of my desperate lonely imagination
Sealed up in my hosue
Surronded by the thornes you planted
With your tear and blood stained hands
So that I forgot the moon and the stars
All I knew was something wasnet quite right
All I sensed was something you told me was a lie

Broke my piano keys
Cut my guitar strings
Clipped of all my wings
Please dont make me weep
My heart was yours to keep
But you abused me
Cut me open and bleed me dry
Of blood and love

I am constantly without
Everything your not
Pump me full of caffine
And keep me up to watch you destroy yourself
Your taking me down with you
But Im too in love to stop it
Your broke every mirror in the house
So I forgot what I looked like
I forgot what I thought I knew
Which wasnet guite enough
To save me from you

Copyright © socialburnin ... [ 2004-12-02 19:22:59]
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Re: Enclosue (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Friday, 3rd December 2004 @ 02:58:07 PM AEST
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I think this would make a good song, actually. Good job.

You were nothing without
Your fake dramatic shouts
Caught up in the pieces
Of each broken life you led

Great lines, great imaged. This would be great with some good music to it.

Be True,
zenmind

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