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Teenage Years
Contributed by
Clarity_Rising
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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You’re struggling onto the road to adulthood,
You carry to many bricks upon your back,
You feel alone on this two-lane street,
Yet all your friends follow in your tracks.
The highway turns, bends, and curves,
The roadway signs don’t show the way,
People shove you in the wrong direction,
It’s hard to tell the night from day.
I hear you cry and understand,
I know your anguish and your pain,
For I was fourteen once in a second life,
I too have felt the sun and rain.
Just keep on struggling my little brother,
The road you travel will soon end,
And if you slip upon your journey,
I will always have a hand to lend.
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Clarity_Rising
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2004-12-02 17:31:10]
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Re: Teenage Years
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:33:10 PM AEST
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| Very sweet write. |
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Re: Teenage Years
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:25:45 AM AEST
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| you've captured it so well, that place we have all been to but try so hard to forget. |
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Re: Teenage Years
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:01:03 PM AEST
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So true and sweet.
Spazzo |
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Re: Teenage Years
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 07:12:08 PM AEST
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Very simple and honest...
quite beautiful too in it's wisdom.
Very well done
Larry
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Re: Teenage Years
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 11:46:19 PM AEST
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A warm, tender and heartfelt write.
Your brother is lucky to have such
a special, wonderful & talented
sister like yourself. May your
beautiful bond never be broken~
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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