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The Evil
Contributed by
LaurenK
on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Filled with false views
blinded from what's true
creeps into your soul
slowly controls you.
Dead but still walking
feeling so high
takes what is left of you
as life passes you by.
Spirit eaten away
so slow yet so quick
so strong the desire
then makes you so sick.
For something so wrong
it makes you feel alright
the hold is so strong
to weak to fight.
First you're nobody
then you feel like a king
but like a thief in the night
it takes everything.
The Evil deceives you
grabs hold of your heart
it will take you away
and tear your world apart.
Copyright ©
LaurenK
... [
2004-12-02 17:20:24]
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Re: The Evil
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST
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| powerful write written well. very true. expressed well. |
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Re: The Evil
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:21:41 PM AEST
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| This was an absolutely amazing poem. So tre, and so sad. Good write. It really hit home. |
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