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Sifted of Silences
Contributed by
youknowwho
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:45:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sifted of my vaguest memories
I only remember your face lit by my cigarette
The silence that drove me
and drew me into being content with standing
Frozen still in a winter storm
Stuck into a frame of loose fingers to a pen
a paper in my palm that is always void of poetic verse
Swollen and sensitive to touch
A bruised conscience
Lost in a flux of words that were never spoken
A fleeting moral value that
escaped from my impressionable youth
Aged to a blemished contentment
with standing so perfectly still
This as all things
escaped from my grasp in a winter storm
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youknowwho
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2004-12-02 16:45:34]
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Re: Sifted of Silences
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:50:20 PM AEST
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Goodness, you know how to grab a reader's attention, hold it firmly, and then set it down gently. What a write! Bravo!
Going to check more of your stuff.
Wow.
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Re: Sifted of Silences
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:17:47 PM AEST
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| I'm very impressed, I really enjoyed readying your poem. |
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Re: Sifted of Silences
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:29:04 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. started strong and ended powerfully. |
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Re: Sifted of Silences
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:46:22 PM AEST
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frozen still in a winters storm you really capture emotions very vivid nice job
Michelle |
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