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Death
Contributed by
coaster
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Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Let me hear your voice again
We as ghost have been locked within dens
For you are one of the others outside the fence
And for I only know through a sense
Slowley untwining towards our ends
But there is not a purpose to defend
Our futures will begin to unfold
Roads ahead are always controlled
There's always a way to get out of the hole
It only relies within your mind...body...and soul
Secrets beyond life will be expressed but not told
With patience we will find what the mysteries all hold
Death can be a beautiful thing
But we live for now and see what life brings
Copyright ©
coaster
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2004-12-02 16:27:18]
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Re: Death
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 04:27:52 PM AEST
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that was so well written, I really liked it :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Death
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 05:21:03 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading your poem, good work! |
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Re: Death
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:36:34 PM AEST
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| excellent write. nice rhymes as always =] |
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Re: Death
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by ASUNDERCHAZ on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 11:12:52 PM AEST
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THIS RESOUNDS IN MY EARS, AS TRUTH.THIS TOO HAS PASSED MY DOOR VERY RECENTLY. THANK FOR THE EXPRESSION.
ASUNDERCHAZ |
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